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Well, I did notice a couple of grammatical errors in your first paragraph of your homepage: instead of "...the right place for latest..." it should be "...the right place for the latest...". Also "...from the webs most respected..." should be "from the web's most respected...". So I suggest you get a professional to proofread your copy and make sure there aren't any other typos. Some of the sentences are also a little awkward to read, and some are not complete sentences: perhaps you're not a native speaker of English... or maybe just need another pair of eyes to look over it. You also might want to increase the font size and/or go to black writing instead of the small grey font you currently have - I didn't find it very easy on the eyes to read. Also, check over your keywords and meta descriptions while you're at it... I took a quick look and saw a couple of typos in your keywords (unless that was intentional?), and a description that did not include your main keywords.... those are important for SEO. Joanna------------------------Joanna Lees-Castro http://www.Easy-Marketing-Strategies.com “Successful Marketing Strategies Made Easy”