My new website

Looks nice enough but a few points:

Why on earth do you have a live news page? Do you think people will go to your site to buy computer equipment or look up the latest sports news? This is a good way to divert people away from your site.

The about us page needs to be re-written in proper English. Maybe you should use a professional copywriter?

Same goes for your T&C page - there is a spelling mistake on the first question. You also need to reword it - nearly every question includes the word 'policy'. The answers on this page clearly show that this is a ready-made site that you have purchased - you haven't filled in the blanks in a couple of sections. In all the answers you are referred to as 'the supplier'. This should be your company name.

Sorry if I come across as a bit harsh, but you really need to do a lot more work to this site.

I like the design of the site, but I would advise you to get a professional copy writer in;Look out over the coming weeks for our new products and we will be extending our stock list of items available and will be offering special discount prices which we can guarantee you will not be able to find anywhere else.

and

we can offer the best affordable prices on the market

Sentences like this just dont make a good impression. And lose the live news page.

However, like i said, the design of the site is good. Just a few small changes to the content should perfect it.

Cheers

Sam

If everything in life is a success, you aren't taking enough risks.

Afam Nnaji
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Hi Donato

You have mail.

Nice clean site, agree with the points above about sports news, however links to Engadget and The Register are valid though.

All the best.

p.s I am in the market for an external HDD - 250GB or higher

Kind regards

Glenn Watson
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Glenn Watson Business Consultancy @ Inzvestor

Good cleans site - easy to navigate.
Does it take up a full page on your browser?

kelly
www.makeupworld.co.uk
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