naturallybright started this topic @ 23:02 on 14/06/2008
Naturally Bright is one of the UK's leading brands of teeth whitening products that has the benefit of being used in the comfort of your own home. Our complete teeth sets provide everything that is needed to whiten your teeth to a standard as you would get from a dental clinic. You can now experience naturally brighter teeth that you have always dreamt of for a fraction of the cost.
Please feel free to browse my site and rate it if you wish.
www.naturallybright.co.uk
James Irwin
Naturally Bright Ltd
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Hot Ice Inc | 19/06/2008 04:57 PM
nice site, good work.
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george_young | 26/06/2008 11:25 PM
Hi James,
I like the modern style of the graphics, but I wonder if it might be better if you adopted a more traditional colour scheme? Your sales rate could be improved by appearing more like a health clinic website, with cool blues on a plain, white background. It may give your customers a little more reassurance of the product than the edgy, dark graphics can provide.
It looks like you are using Google Analytics to track visits, how high is your bounce rate? This will give you a clue as to your visitors' initial impressions. It would also be good to check your goal conversions, to try and spot any bottlenecks as your customers are funnelled towards your (nicely integrated!) payment page.
Brighter, colour product shots may also be a benefit; the zoom for your images is in black and white, and it's important that your first-time customers do not think that your products will not bear scrutiny in bright daylight!
It may be good to create some link-baiting content on general teethcare to complement your cosmetic product. Recommending its use in addition to a traditional hygiene routine may form a beneficial association...
Just some thoughts, feel free to disregard them!
George
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George Young
AG Adapt Ltd
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